We friends had a wonderful habit on hostel. We would pick up certain line of a sher and expand it (Kaafiyas and Misras in Shaayari).
Here is a glimpse of it. The original line "Kuchh ghazalein to bas seene me ulazhi achchhi lagti hai" was taken from Twitter.
Here is a glimpse of it. The original line "Kuchh ghazalein to bas seene me ulazhi achchhi lagti hai" was taken from Twitter.
Kuchh ghazalein to bas seene me ulazhi achchhi lagti hai,
Alfaz to gumsum rahe ashko ki nami sacchi lagti hai...
Parindo jaisi nadan hai ghazalein, ye bhi udna chahe,
Par shayad aaj bhi unhe ye dillagi kuch kachchi lagti hai.....
Alfaz to gumsum rahe ashko ki nami sacchi lagti hai...
Parindo jaisi nadan hai ghazalein, ye bhi udna chahe,
Par shayad aaj bhi unhe ye dillagi kuch kachchi lagti hai.....
Kuchh ghazalein to bas seene me ulazhi achchhi lagti hai,
Yun hi mere ghazalo si ulazhi hui teri nasamazhi achchhi lagti hai...
Yun hi mere ghazalo si ulazhi hui teri nasamazhi achchhi lagti hai...
ha ha ha.. wah wah.. :)
ReplyDeletei m really a fan of kapil sir's compositions and now to your shayeri extensions too ..:D:D
ReplyDeletealfaz to gumsum... wali line jani pehchani lag rahi hai.
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maine bola tha ise ke wo line ashutosh ki hai...shayd ye bhul gyaa.....hahhaha
Deleteoye abhi bola tha na ke wo second line ashutosh ki hai mera naam kyu dala usme......
ReplyDeleteSorry for the goof up guys... Names deleted so this piece of imagination and improvisation belongs to all of us now...:-)
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